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Here is a poem for you

you write with a line that sux,
tried to fly the sky by drivin trucks.
you aint making sense,
your brain is like ants.
simonmoses on the loo, ate your poo.
with poems like that,what else did he do?
call you the master,
ill call you disaster!
STAMPEDE,ill grind on your head,
before you even know it, you're down and dead!
passing centuaries by the cemetaries!
you speak,like akeeper of dogs.
which really is,unorthodoxed.
here is a blank-______,say hi!
cause the rest of us are leavin,aint wanna listen to you,BYE!

STRIKE YOU!

Posted by: Peter Date: 10/09/2007
   

damn all of you who like it..FAKE WRITER WHO SUX!

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SUX,F*CK U

Posted by: Peter Date: 10/09/2007
   

Amazing

I love your poems. They are absolutely amazing. There really are no words
to describe your writing, except the typical cliche lines I used above.
Don't ever stop writing.

Posted by: DulcisxCruor Date: 09/05/2008
   

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